Question Home

Position:Home>Poetry> Is this sappy love poem suitable for a boy to give his girl?


Question: Is this sappy love poem suitable for a boy to give his girl!?
This one was written by special request of someone who wanted to impress his girl!. Immediately after reading it to her he proposed!. She accepted!. I wrote this in 1997, they wed in 1998 and are still happy and have 3 beautiful children!. I get Christmas cards with pictures every year!.


I Dream of You

I Dream Of Jeannie is a song,
It was a tv show!.
It is the thing I do at night
When off to sleep I go!.

When I awake, I know, of course
That she'll be on my mind!.
She is so loving, nice, and true!.
She is so sweet and kind!.

I want to love her every day
And every day I do!.
Even if she ran me off,
I'd still say "I Love You"!.

If I had the wherewithall,
I'd buy her diamond rings!.
I'd buy her minks, I'd buy her chains,
And many pretty things!.

I ask for nothing in return
These things would be a gift!.
A present sent to Jeannie dear,
To give her heart a lift!.

I think about her every day
I write these little rhymes!.
I think about her when I'm blue,
And in the best of times!.

If 'ere I wake and find her gone
From deep within my head!.
I fear they'll have to bury me!.
For I just woke up dead!.

Today I made my Jeannie dear
A present of my heart!.
I promise from this moment on
Our souls will never part!.

She is within me and without,
And all around me too!.
I want to tell her to the world,
My darling, I love you!.

When I die you can believe,
I'll look down from above!.
I'll see you here without me,
And send you my pure love!.

To keep you safe and from harms way,
I'll send it down to you!.
Not even death will take from me
The love I have for you!.

But let's not talk of sad times,
I will not soon be dead!.
For long as I still have you
My blood will still pump red!.

This has been a love song
wrote from my heart to you!.
I will always love you
While one and one make two!.

I've said it all and now I know
There's one thing left to do!.
And that my darling Jeannie doll,
Is say that I love you!.
Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sweet mush, but totally effective!!!
You romantic, you!
Great rhyming as always!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, it is perfectly suitable, and no doubt she sat quietly, quite enthralled, despite it's length!.

It is good to know, I am not the only who has written sappy poems,,, though you are far better than I am!.

Kudos Mr!. D!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Once again, Dondi, you have proven yourself to be the Romeo of poetry!. Thank you for this beautiful glimpse of your talents, and that true love still reigns as king!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Just the right amount of sap, to send the right message, to the right person ,at the right time, to get the right response!. I'd say you did the right thing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

its good but would be better as a song set to music Www@QuestionHome@Com

wonderful u have already earned ur reward

in my case a guy named his third son with my first name

i wasnt aware he knew my first name

CONGRATS u r a WINNERWww@QuestionHome@Com

it is impressionable!!!
it is wonderful!! awwww so cute!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cyrano De Bererac could not have said it better than you!.
I like to hear happy endings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love sappy poems!. This is more than appropriate!. It is heartfelt and written in words that are clear and understandable!. You get what you see! Www@QuestionHome@Com

All I can say is "Love Stinks"

I've been through the Diamonds and I've been through the Minks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sappy sweet, it sings!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awwww!.

That was really sweet!.

So yes! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you're not married, my answer is "yes!"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it is cute
Www@QuestionHome@Com

sureWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's rather long but cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com

go for itWww@QuestionHome@Com

beautiful! yeah, i guess a girl would fall for it ;-)Www@QuestionHome@Com