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Question: My poem Why oh why longer version!?
Why oh why
My gf cheated I barely cried
I prayed wisdom
she acted dumb
I felt heated
because she cheated
my new best friend is captain crunch
I ate some for lunch
my car is my new wife
at least she will not hurt me in this life
now i lift weights
everything in my life is going to be straight
I dont worry about finding a mate
I almost was a sucker for a girl who was using me for bait
She thought I was going to be the one to sit around while she partied and wait
She never thought I would confront face to face
She was hurt when I dumped her at her place
She tried to chase
But the other guy was in her place
Sitting on the couch
Stuffing his mouth
A part of me said now I can get a hotter woman than her
One who could make my heart purrrrrrrrr
Or maybe skip a beat like a heart murmur
Life was getting stupid
Oh no I just killed cupid
now my heart is in closed in an armored pod
Time for me to get closer with god
Maybe it is time for me to see
that there really are more fishes in the sea
Too bad I dont have a net lol
What do you guys/gals think about it
I made this up in like 3 mins bit this happened for realWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I felt sorry for the girl who cheated you, she didn't know
how to treasure like you!

she allowed to loose someone like you!
If I were her I will not allow you to loose & I'm not goin to hurt you!.!.
It's my pleasure to love you!!.!.

IF I WAS HER!.!.! gorgeous man!.!.
lol

----edit---
YESSSSSSS
I don't have any opportunity to
see you in person!.!.
but for me, you're still gorgeous!
don't argue it's my opinion!.!.
& you can't do anything to change my
brilliant opinion!
lol

-----edit-----
you're not hypocrite!.!.
I know in my heart that you were telling the truths
about your advice & your story!.!.
sleep well!! dream on me!
lol

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bad!.!.
cupid is huggable!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hes a minute man
its no wonder
his girl left him
like thunder

He killed cupid
no that's just
plain stupid

He got cheated
and says he's heated
he eats to feel needed

Eats Mc Donald's
now he works out
like crazy
485 calories on a Big Mac
made him lazy!.!.!.

Life is unfair you need to learn to take it!.!.!.
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My armored pod for my heart is big enough to store all of the hearts I steal or cut out with my kitchen knife!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ROTF!

I've got more, too! Most of the old ones involve hurting someone, tho! Haha!! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Made it in 3 minutes !?

U're a born poet, lo !Www@QuestionHome@Com

it sounds like a very bad freestyle rap to me!.!.

EDIT:
btw, "fishes'' is not a word!.
It is just fish!.
you can have A fish, or you can have MANY fish!.

haha good point man, i think its one of those 'poems' that isn't good yet it is jus cuz its funny!.Www@QuestionHome@Com