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Sitting up here, as people are staring,
Filled with memories, of moments passed by!.
I get old and dusty, as the days go on:
My face will change, when you do choose:
I lay at an angle, as I look back at you!.
As time rolls on, I’ll help you remember,
Drawing Different emotion, delightful or sad!.
Reminisce as you look back, relive all those times,
Full of friends and family, frolicking in the fun!.
I come in many styles, colorful or plain,
I’ll be happy on your mantle, or hung on your wall!.
Glancing as you pass, giving a grin,
Here I am sitting still, just like a statue!.
I glisten in the sun, and I’m gloomy at night!.
Waiting in the dark, wishing for the sunrise,
A new day begins bringing new happiness!.
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