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Question: Poem: and can my heartbeats evade!?
There's a monster inside of me
Whose heart beats shadows mine
And nightmares seeps his thoughts
Possible and sublime
And can my heartbeats evade
Cravings for this dark dish
That tugs the strings of my heart
With logic thats hard to resist
And I endulge these fantasies
These tainted thoughts of mine
To relieve the hell which abides
In the darkness of my mind
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wow!. i like this a lot ;]
you are very talentedWww@QuestionHome@Com
Excellent and emotional!. I like it !.Good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
there's a sad angel inside of you!
we are human and human can never be monster!.
I like your poemWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's not poetry; it's not even decent English!.
You need to try a lot harder!Www@QuestionHome@Com
very strong phrases, a pleasure to read!.!.!.please, lets hear more!Www@QuestionHome@Com