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Question: A POEM!!! YAY!!!! Heres a question mark because I have to use it lol !?
Ok after school we have a writing club and the first ten minutes are Free Write where we basically write whatever lol!.
Well the last 5 minutes after numerous sort stories and couplets and triplets and top ten lists I cam up with this!.



!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh yeah when you see the up part and it looks like
p
u
read it upwards and you will see that it spells up lol same thing with rightside up at the end!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


THIS IS NOT A FINAL DRAFT IT IS A ROUGH SLOPPY COPY


Lets turn the world upside down
Longways is now sideways
And short-ways is diagonal-ways
Where Halloween is on Christmas
Easter on Thanksgiving
Right is
p
u
And left
is
d
o
w
n
Monsters are at the circus
And clowns hide under the bed
Girls are stars
Boys are monkeys
Teacher is Student
Student is Teacher
Well now that everything is upside down
Shouldnt upside down
Be
Upside down
So now upside down
is
p
u
e
d
i
s
t
h
g
i
r
So are we living in a truly backwards world!?!?!?!?




Yes I believe so






Ok thats the end if its akward with the words it supposed to be ok lol
I just turned 14 and havent been writing long so yeah it probby will suckWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
THIS IS GREAT!
I'm in a writing 12 class right now, and something like that is really high-quality stuff!. Such individuality and creativity expressed, and abstract ideas are great!. Make sure that you keep up this flow of imagination and do not let structure and criteria cripple your ideas!. This reminds me of those paintings with just splatters of colour; some people look at it and say that a kindergardener could have done it, and others see the underlying talent and pay millions of dollars for it!. But life is always like that, isn't it!? That's all life is!.!.!.perspective!.

But i love it, keep it up! =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great idea for a poem! Unusual thoughts neatly expressed!. I am loathe to give specific suggestions for changes, but work with this idea for maximum effect

Then repost it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOVED IT very cleer write it made me smile!.!. very clever use of opposites or rather upsidedowners lol very well done!.!. sounds like a great class !.!. keep it up Lib x x Www@QuestionHome@Com

What do want from me!? A review!? A cookie!?Www@QuestionHome@Com