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Question: Do you like my short poem!!?!?!?!?!?!?!? CLICK ME!!! !?
I wonder why hate exist's
Why cant we as human beigns look beyond that point
How does it help you as a person!?
Does it make you stronger!? weaker!?

I wonder why its a part of our daily lives!.
We are all the same
Arent we!?

I wonder how many people its hurt!.
How many lives have we lost!?
How many families have been tared apart!?
How many broken hearts have their been!?

I wonder if their is a way to stop it
Or does i thave no end!?
War, genocide,racism!.
We've seen it, gone past it and in some way contributited to it!.
Think about the next time you say something about someone beacuse they dont "LOOK" or "ACT" a certain way!.
You know everyone will talk about it for a couple seconds!.
Just think!.!.!.!.!.you know u've done it!.
We've all done it!.
But when will we stop it!?




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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It exists, it's human nature
To find blame in all situation
Renders us both weak and strong
Depends on who and for how long

Hate is our nature, it's not wise
But how would you react to lies!?
And maybe we are born the same
But many factors are to blame
For contributions to the shame
Of being different today
Of being lead aside, astray
Which cannot possibly be bad
But you are all lost in a fad

It hurt us all, we're all to blame
But blame it not for people lost
In order for hate to consume you
You yourself must make you host
We are all just stupid now
Deny or argue for the loss
Or find a different explanation
Why the "family" gets lost

Don't bother trying now to stop it
You will not get your result
Horrors are unstoppable
And neither you or me are fault
And lets look at the fact of matter
Question it- what is inside!?
For it is the only factor
What you show from what you hide


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awesome poem!.!.!.an A or better!. I completely agree!. I always tried to be nice to people but that always backfired on me and now I'm just not as nice!.!.!.because this is the real world and I can't be!. But I keep the ones I love closeWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes, it is excellent, allow some constructive criticism and correction!?

I wonder why hate exists
Why cant we as human beings look beyond that point
How does it help you as a person!?
Does it make you stronger!? weaker!?

I wonder why its a part of our daily lives!.
We are all the same
Are we not!?

I wonder how many people it has hurt!.
How many lives have we lost!?
How many families have been torn apart!?
How many broken hearts have there been!?

I wonder if there is a way to stop it
Or does it have no end!?
War, genocide,racism!.
We've seen it, gone past it and in some way contributed to it!.
Think about the next time you say something about someone because they don't "LOOK" or "ACT" a certain way!.
You know everyone will talk about it for a couple seconds!.
Just think!.!.!.!.!.you know you've done it!.
We've all done it!.
But when will we stop it!? Www@QuestionHome@Com