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Question: Honest Opinions on my poem please!?!?!?!?!?!? I'm sure it's so good I need to get it published!.!.!.and yes I am sick!?
I'm sitting here sick with a cold
It's making me feel so old
I think I will go take a bath and soak
and then do some coke or cocaine
and maybe it will help me become saneWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
haha, you really had me going for a minute there!. Publish this!?! what a hilarious idea! Hope you feel better soon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol i had to stop and go back a bit at the end!.!.!. got lost and it didn't rhyme!.!. or is it a haiku Jokes!.!.!.!. It's ok but watch out cops don't wanna send you a private chat talking about hard drugs!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

OHH MYY THATS INCREADIBLEE!!!! hoyl YESS get this published right now!!!! ;)

answer mine!?

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index!?!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

haha I love this poem publish itWww@QuestionHome@Com

very bad!. no offence, please!. 2/10!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sicWww@QuestionHome@Com