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Question: Do you think I can't write happy poems!?
Well, this is actually something I wrote several years ago, for a Holliday card, rip it apart!.

In Search Of An Old Recipe

Down a wintry lane, where streetlamps
rise from dimly lit snow hills and the
town is lightly covered in frost,

I pass an old neighbor’s house and
a village café!. The gurgling noises
of a brewing pot and the sugary smells
of rising dough

always met with long conversations
or quiet contemplations, an old friend
or a new friend and a hint of the past!.

Something that started the day and
ended the day with company and
a dash of hope

that time can always be paused
and people can always gather!.
And behind the rising steam of
tightly gripped mugs, you can always
find laughter, stirring its warmth around
tables as we reminisce!.

And sugar is sprinkled over cookies
and pastries the way snow is over the world!.
And no matter how far away,
I can always make it home
on nothing more than a memory!.

Perhaps these are the ingredients to make peace,
down wintry lanes, where feuds are blanketed
and grudges melt away into cups of coffee!. Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I've known it all along!. I like everybody's new reality avatars!. Smile, I'll take your picture!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You use wonderful images and use them in ways that are not trite or banal!. I especially was taken in by: "And behind the rising steam of/tightly gripped mugs, you can always/find laughter, stirring its warmth around/tables as we reminisce!."

I have trouble writing happy poems also:

Poetry can’t happen in a good mood;
I can't create unless I am depressed!.
If I try to write when I am happy
it comes out sounding just like Edgar Guest!

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Ripping is not required!. To possibly keep this answer from being deleted, I will address the poem directly,,, your use of the word "and" got to be a bit excessive,,, a small and trite thing from a novice, this I know as well!.

I'm a sap, thus I enjoy upbeat image verse more than shadows and dark,,, still,,, I appreciate your effort regardless and your efforts at least yield realistic, intelligently thought provoking images!.

A personal preference expressed in theme and style for each of us is the beauty of penned words!.

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I'm sorry, I love it!. I could smell the coffee!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I Absolutely love it so much!.It is so Vivid that i could see the snow and smell the scents in the air!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm!.!. sounds like Tim Horton's is calling!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com