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Question: Tell me what you think of this!. Honest opinions please!.!?
Be With You

I'm not in love I know!.
But I how I desire you so!.
I want to make love with you slow!.
Take me home with you tonight!.

I tried to dismiss you and failed!.
Somehow I've been derailed!.
In comparison, all others paled!.
Let me have you until morning light!.

At night I sleep and dream of your face!.
Of your mesmerizing embrace!.
You style, your demeanor and your grace!.
Let us relish each other in delight!.

You stand adherent in my mind!.
Unleash my love and unbind!.
We will take this one step at a time!.
This most certainly has to be right!.

Deliver me with white, hot heat!.
Send me to the tallest peak!.
Take my love in sweet defeat!.
Explore me under the silver glow of moonlight!.

Mmm, sharing my love with you felt so good!.
You satisfied me, and I knew you would!.
We must meet again, you know we should,
Take each other to the highest of heights!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this one line stands out in our mind!.!.!. "Take my love in sweet defeat!." Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's OK!. I'm not a big fan of rhyming poetry, but it's an all right poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com