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Looking Into mirror seeing Eerily Strange reflections Walls perfectly Erected to protect and deceive Believing we have bought Everything Life pretends to be Insidious truths Erupting, destroying, offering a Vile, harsh Ending to our comfort zone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The contrasts in your poem are true poetic expression!. Walls, which are meant to protect deceive at the same time!. Truths are 'insidious!.' They destroy and erupt like volcanoes!. Life itself is a pretender You have done well in this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a profound and personal poem that I relate to especially well!. Those "insidious truths" deconstruct the walls I build so well, and I am left with only reality in the mirror!. This is most certainly out of my comfort zone!.Your words are harsh but heavy with truth!. You have a gift for presenting undeniable truths in your poems!. Thank you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com This reads so smoothly and is so succinct!. My favorite lines: "Walls perfectly Erected to protect and deceive", "Believing we have bought Everything" And the end was almost effortless!. Thanks for sharing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com That's gotta be the Phrase of the Day!.!.!.!."insidious truth" - amazing! Knock out poem ma! This slams! That's the truth!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I try to be more hopeful and trusting but there is much truth in this fine acrostic!. Thanks, Ma!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's really not a lie until somebody believes it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well done!. There is a lesson in there!. Don't forget the lesson or the offer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com !.!.!.and of all the lies "I love you" is the worst of all!. (this seems to be a theme lately from me)Www@QuestionHome@Com The reflection was only you ma, not anyone else!. You do what you can!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I say well done, once again, Ma!. If we can deceive ourselves, then what value are we to othersWww@QuestionHome@Com I had to look up acrostic in the dictionary!. Neat!Www@QuestionHome@Com Made me shiver!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Ma I love this and you thank you Www@QuestionHome@Com You have truly found your talent ma!. Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com hi another great poem so true hugs Www@QuestionHome@Com not mending wallWww@QuestionHome@Com |