Hi, can you rate this poem for me out of 100?

Question: Hi, can you rate this poem for me out of 100!?

this is my first try at poetry!.i want to know whether its good and whether i can go on writing poetry this way!.please rate it out of 100!.point out places where i can improve and give honest comments on it!.also,if any of you has some good ideas on which i can make another poem,then please share those ideas with me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Its very cheerful and smiley!. 100 points!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My dear, this is advice!. A poem ought to be different!. There should be symbols, emotions, craft in the arrangement of words, and the reader should have a strange feeling after reading it!. The meaning need not be crystal clear, yet it will set a peculiar charge in the mind!. Of course there are different types of poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Instead of So take from me a clue, add the word "little" in there eg So take from me a little clue, this rolls off the tongue more easily and rhymes better with the next verse!. Good poem though, it made me smile!. 85 out of 100!. You will get better and better with practise!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

As a first try, it's worth 20 of 100!. You need either to have a form or use free verse!. Part of it rhymes, part doesn't, it needs to be consistent!. By all means, keep trying, because that is where perfection finally comes!. I've been trying for 52 years, and still haven't quite gotten good at it!. At least I'm not satisfied with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

75 out of 100, it is good!. it could maybe use a little polishing but overall good!. as far as the sentiment, the world could definitely benefit from the advice :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

don't about wat the other people say all poems aren't meant to rhyme
i think i will give about 100 out of 100Www@QuestionHome@Com

What poem!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Give us a clue; let's see the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com