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Question: Can i be of service to my poet friends!?
i just read Eva's truth tattered poem!.!.
i dont know whats going on!.!.
but i need Eva and all you!.!.!.dont go away!.
Let ME Fight!!
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Inner Strength
Two runed swords
double blades with fight,
walk with Life,
sentry Love and Right
guarding Ghosts
clanging unsheathed nights,
reason the
days, listens to Light!.
without hunt
or flavoring aim,
redolent
for evil, steel drained!.
polished heart
flooding blood and tears
two runed swords
carved, 'persevere'!.
http://www!.omgwhatever!.com/mars/innerstr!.!.!.(i drew a pic for this)
im all riled up!.
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Swords strike true,
the runes purifying,
healing the very
wound they made!.
Only the gentle
can truly wage war,
cutting, not with their own mind,
but with love!.!.!.
contradiction, no,
truth!.!.!.
need for those others
who are not us!.!.!.
who save us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Do you mean two ruined swords!?
I cannot make to much sense of your poem, perhaps it is a little deep for me!. I come up with the idea that there are two ruined swords which are still carrying on the fight!. There is a smell of evil about the whole scene, yet the swords still guard the ghosts of those slain!.
You say you are all riled up, well so am I that I cannot put some understanding to you effort!. I am sorry about that!.
RobertWww@QuestionHome@Com
Magic swords upholding truth and right dispatching evil!.!.!.persevering!. Is that the shortened version!?
Sites abound, all carry the good and 'others'!. This is one of the better ones, in spite of the few who enjoy their games!. I liked your drawing!. Charming looking fella you!.!.!.can you plow with those rune swords too!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Persevere brother and fight on!.
Your poem reminded me of Aragorn's sword (from the Lord of the Rings) being reforged to rid the world of evil!. For some reason it made sense to me!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Gad zooks, Farmer!.!.!.your drawing resembles me prior to coffee in the morning!
(Obviously the spell chick has no clue what zooks are!. Come to think of it, neither do I!.!.!.but I love the word!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think I get your runic drift, Farmer!.
I will stay here and enjoy the positive whilst sailing over the negative,
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Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Strange, you are not the farmer I know!. I suppose there is more than one Farmer in the world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
