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Question: Is this a deeply romantic poem!?
i just wrote this for my husband and just wondering what you think


The First Thing That I See

It’s being in bed mornings first light
It’s your face that’s turned to me
It’s your eyes open, your smile so bright
I still love the first thing that I see

If I’m cold and shivering
If I’m clumsy effortlessly
If I’m sad and tears are falling
I still love the first thing that I see

The warm and sweet loving kiss
The prewritten path of our destiny
The heartfelt moments I never miss
I still love the first thing that I see

As deep as each ocean combined
As beautiful as written calligraphy
As imaginative as an artists mind
I still love the first thing that I see

Your love that shines so great
Your heart as pure as can be
Your devotion that I cannot rate
That’s the first thing that I see


Sammi
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