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Question: I am asking: Can you be drawn !?
What draws you!?

You draw me

As charcoal sketches silhouette on rock

As water runs into tub

As crowd to fairground

Magnet north to Magnet south

You draw me

As a pencil traces black and white on paper

As flames in fire

As skier to ski slope

Polar left to polar right

I am drawn to you!.

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Not so much Drawn as Traced!. I always end up in the bin!.

Nice Words Poppet!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Drawn variations!. Very clever!. I guess for me it sort of just lists the variations and doesn't create a "path" to saying "I am drawn to you"!. A lil bit of rearranging will see a difference!. Maybe pair up the tenses!.!.!. the sketch, downward fall, attraction with the final "as flames in fire" the second last line!. I like the idea and the potential for it!. well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

drawn to me!?

Humphrey Bogart said it best in the movie "Casablanca"!.

"Louie, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship!."

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yup like static to cashmere
like lightening to golf clubs
like helium to the atmosphere
like breath to throat
like a child to a balloon

It's a magnetic world!.!.!. nice poem

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Yes, like a bee to roses
Like consequences to causes

lovely! A new door you are opening today!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeppers,,,

nope, no sassy comments, just agreementWww@QuestionHome@Com

Drawn to your query, I drew!.!.!.!.!.And posted one!.!.!.I hope you don't mind the intrusion on your art work!.!.!.!.Peace, R

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