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Question: I am asking: Can you be drawn !?
What draws you!?
You draw me
As charcoal sketches silhouette on rock
As water runs into tub
As crowd to fairground
Magnet north to Magnet south
You draw me
As a pencil traces black and white on paper
As flames in fire
As skier to ski slope
Polar left to polar right
I am drawn to you!.
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Not so much Drawn as Traced!. I always end up in the bin!.
Nice Words Poppet!.xWww@QuestionHome@Com
Drawn variations!. Very clever!. I guess for me it sort of just lists the variations and doesn't create a "path" to saying "I am drawn to you"!. A lil bit of rearranging will see a difference!. Maybe pair up the tenses!.!.!. the sketch, downward fall, attraction with the final "as flames in fire" the second last line!. I like the idea and the potential for it!. well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
drawn to me!?
Humphrey Bogart said it best in the movie "Casablanca"!.
"Louie, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship!."
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yup like static to cashmere
like lightening to golf clubs
like helium to the atmosphere
like breath to throat
like a child to a balloon
It's a magnetic world!.!.!. nice poem
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Yes, like a bee to roses
Like consequences to causes
lovely! A new door you are opening today!Www@QuestionHome@Com
yeppers,,,
nope, no sassy comments, just agreementWww@QuestionHome@Com
Drawn to your query, I drew!.!.!.!.!.And posted one!.!.!.I hope you don't mind the intrusion on your art work!.!.!.!.Peace, R
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