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Question: How is it a non beach person can pen two beach poems !?
I posted my 'beach painted' poem earlier speaking of happier times as a counterpoint to the autumn postings,,, now the flip side of the beach I suppose!.

As always, comments and suggestions are truly welcomed by this novice who struggles most days!.

Reflected in a single grain of sand,
returning the light, a distant source!.
In a shining moment, I heard you calling,
whispers from distant breaking waves!.

I knew you were there, yes, I saw you pass,
reflection of a single, white grain of sand!.
Grieving, my only plan, until I saw your light,
heard your sultry, soothing voice speak to me!.

Upon my mantle, surely a place of honor,
I preserved that single grain of sand!.
My grief has eased, no longer haunting,
I know you passed to a calm, gentle place!.



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This was very nice read and I enjoyed it ! I like your metaphor with the sand, I like it all!
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to answer your question:
vicariously!?

love this line "Reflected in a single grain of sand"

all the wisdom of fhe sea in a grain of sand, Sergio Mendez "Look Around"Www@QuestionHome@Com

This speaks of sadness and reflection!. The grain of sand a metaphor for someone dear, now gone!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com