I have another poem for you critique. Be honest and polite.?

Question: I have another poem for you critique!. Be honest and polite!.!?

Circle of Emotion

In disagreement, anger!.
In anger, conflict!.
In conflict, war!.
In war, death!.
In death, sorrow!.
In sorrow, forgiveness!.
In forgiveness, peace!.
In peace, friendship!.
In friendship, love!.
In love, passion!.
In passion!.!.!.

Disagreement!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Oh wow, I like this very much!. Even though I knew that at the beginning, "disagreement" would eventually come back around to itself judging from the title, the transition from passion to disagreement really hit me!. And only because it's so very true!.

The only thing I could find to critique, and even this is going a bit more into personal preference, is the change from "disagreement to anger, and anger to conflict!." I think that disagreement could just lead directly to conflict, which could lead to war, but this is, of course, only my view!. It's still fabulous the way it is!. In fact, taking out anger makes the poem quite a bit different!. Especially if anger is something you definitely want to include in the circle of emotions!. :)

All in all, the poem is really well written!. Very creative!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats real good ! i like your poems they are real good !! its clever !! if you have more send them to me at barcelona1787@yahoo!.com that would be nice and i can send some of mine to you too !Www@QuestionHome@Com

its boring!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

woah
dude
that
was
AWESOME!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i just love it all of it, it is beautiful how it is being saidWww@QuestionHome@Com