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Question: What do you think!? Be polite but be honest!.!?
There's too much cryin'
Way too much dyin'
What has gone wrong
Where is the song
The world has turned
Cities have burned
War is among us
Young men on the bus
Everybody looses
Nobody wins
May God forgive us
For our sins
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its real good ! you go straight to the point and its something that its real in this world !! i like it a lot !!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is good!.!.!. except what is with "young men on the bus"!? it is quite irrelivant!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is too cryptic!. Who are the young men!? Which wars!? Which god!?
Still, a good start!.!.!.
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its good i like how it is being ExpressWww@QuestionHome@Com