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Question: Musing again!.!. would you care to comment on my messy muse!?
Oh gosh, darn, dang,
My muse is off her game again
Just look what she has gone and done!!
Girls just want to have fun………!.

The mess is here now
Plain to see,
With a jump and a plop
I ‘m wet as can be!.

The fish are looking
Shocked to see
Intruder in the water
They nibble and tickle
She twirls and giggles
And round the tank
She moves and wiggles
As lady bettas ring her
all around
Ogling with wonder

Oh great thunder, what HAS she done…!.!.!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Loved this what a fun piece really made me smile loved nibble and tickle!.!.twirls and giggles and round the tank she moves and wiggles!.!.
then to ogle in wonder!.!. just brilliant :) Hugs Lib x x Www@QuestionHome@Com

it’s like finding a creative oasis in a wasteland of ideas… reminds us of this book we read once… in the book there was a desert… in the desert there was this palace… in the palace there was a bathing pool… in the bathing pool were these little fish… these fish would come nibble on us as we bathed… Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Oh gosh, darn, dang,
My muse is off her game again
Just look what she has gone and done!!
Girls just want to have fun………!."


she's not so far off her game as to be out've bounds nor so messy as to be criticizedWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not sure what you were thinking
Not sure if the kitty was drinking
But it's not important whatever I thank
Sounds like you beta get a bigger fish tank!.!.!.!.!.PahooootWww@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting!.
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Another smile! Today is looking better and better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

jumped in the aquarium again, I see!.!. I hope she had a suit on this time!. The fish hate it when she goes skinny dipping!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I talked about getting wet this is not what I meant!.!.!. a walk in summer rain would have sufficed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now thats one messy muse!
lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Hooray! This was in my inbox!!
And very cute too!

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You had other fish in with a betta!? I don't believe it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com