What say to the poem, "Final Frontier"?

Question: What say to the poem, "Final Frontier"!?

If we arranged stars!.!.!.
Insignificant songs,
Inspiring distant hearing!.!.!.
Would Light drift closer!.!.!.

Than bark of trees,
Toughened rough, protecting
Through tests, Time!.!.!.
Would Light drift closer!.!.!.

Brightening woods' violets
Buffeted through winter
Bouts of moody iciness!.!.!.
Would Light drift closer!.!.!.

Into our eyes of mind!.!.!.
Since we do arrange
Stars!.
Light!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Superb poem!.(again) format wonderful, imagery transporting!. Skill obvious!. Triumphant arrangement!.

Does each 4th line in the first 3 stanzas need a question mark!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellent poetic form!. One ponders the metaphor of light and what it would take to bring it closer to the human mind/soul!. Time toughening and protecting--it is indeed a test, but we as mortals have so little of it!. We arrange the stars as well as we can, but it is never enough!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I always get something from your poems, if only it is the enjoyment of reading lines such as

Brightening woods' violets
Buffeted through winter
Bouts of moody iciness

!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but, I am a simple soul and cannot journey with you to the Final Frontier, the conundrum is too profound!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I especially love, "Would Light drift closer/Than bark of trees!." Your images are always wonderful (and your punctuation is appropriate)!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

At least YA doesn't automatically change your punctuation!.

I like your style!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Standing Ovation!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your punctuation!. And the poem is pretty good too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Alright!.!.!.!.!.
pure simplicity!.!.!.!.

Stay warm n dry!.
Eat some apple pie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Clap on!.!.!.Clap off!.!.!.Da' clapper!.!.!.Let theirs be lightWww@QuestionHome@Com