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Question: So i made a statement for nature and somewhat against society and conformity; critique welcome, check this out!?
i took pics of nature and placed them to awesome songs on videos i put on youtube!. check em out if you would and tell me what you think; cool video!? lame video!? hippie video!?

i dont support the kkk either, i put that pic in there to go with the lyrics at the beginning of the video indicating things like that are products of society!.

anyway, i live near spearfish canyon in south dakota and its sooooo beautiful out here that i go into the canyon to take pics weekly!.

anyway, do you think my video comes off as a good statement for peace and love etc!. or does it come off as too bitter against society in general!?

i have some great quotes from great philosophers and poets strategically placed within it as well!.

go to www!.youtube!.com and check out my videos

elemental invictus and elemental invictus 2!.

you can search for those words and/or the word xylok will work as well!.

i can take criticism so if you think they are lame and don't say much at all, cool with me; just be honest in your response!.

ten points await the most constructive and honest answer!.

thanks for taking the time by the way; i do appreciate the feedback!.

that being said, i love to critique poetry and philosophical essays etc; and can be reached at poetrysmuse@yahoo!.com if you have works you would like to have explicated, edited, or otherwise critiqued!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You need to make the quotes more readable!. the colors do not blend well and makes it hard to read!. Make the pictures less jumbled and busy!. It's too much to look at at one point!. And the KKK picture is shown when no words are spoken!.Www@QuestionHome@Com