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Question: When you have the time, comment on my last poem of the day !?
Dreams woven by fabric of words, threads of letters,
pictures painted from vivid, concise word brush strokes!.

Seasoned speech with adjectives sprinkled,
bland without picante splashes of exclamation!.

Not for every dish, true, but some like it hot,
throbbing rhythm, verbs make sentences dance!.

Application of nouns tell who, what, when and where,
well thought selections sculpt a visual masterpiece!.

Recite a tale, modify a mood, navigate a journey far,
magic carpet rides through snaking linguistic mazes!.

Culture transcending, space and moments of time erasing,
this dictionary passport worn, thesaurus well packed!.

Blended verbiage teasing, pleasing taste to our brains,
verbal massages float through air, soothing ears!.

At once evoking memory, while yet plying the senses,
mere words crafted into subtle masterful form!.



I've never revealed this much of my poetry before,,, never,,, let alone 3 in one day!.

Thank you all for your patience and suggestions for this novice poet!.

There are some truly awesome folks here !
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your words fill me with ebullience!. They evoke pleasure and I thank you for sharing them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your a talented, sharp and well developed writer and i really appreciate you sharing that with the yahoo community!.
I'm definitely going to check out the other two poems you posted today and please keep writing because it seems words come naturally to you and flow so easily!.
also when i read the poem i thought about how it could help out teenagers in secondary school with learning things like nouns, adjectives and all those meanings!.

Anyways, lovely work
xo amberWww@QuestionHome@Com

Brilliant gifted writer another level, masterfully put your words do dance lose your fear and take a chance!. Bend the words into the abyss of your soul!. I'll love this poem when i'm grey and old!. (keep writing it's good)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unparalleled !. Truly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are no novice, awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good oneWww@QuestionHome@Com