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Question: A poem inspired by Amy E's pain!?
She's Still Standing
By S!. F!. Reborn

She was the bride on top of the world,
The world was her wedding cake!.
Sweet and filled with goodness,
She was petite and filled with goodness,
Complete and filled with goodness!.

But you wanted her slice of cake,
And your own!.
You wanted to rule and control her!.
Who would ever dare to console her!?
They think her life is filled with goodness!.
But you filled her goodness with stress!.
It was you who put the blood on her wedding dress!
It was you who told the world a lie,
You made her cry,
While she bled, you begged her to die!.
And end the life filled with goodness,
I guess!.
You didn't know she wouldn't let stress,
Make her rest or stop praying,
You thought she was playing,
Mumbling words not real sayings,
She left,
No delaying!.

Now her life is filled with goodness!.
Cause she's standing,
She's still praying,
But who's standing over you while you sleep!?
Start praying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Thank you soooo much for your compassion for women and this poem you made!.
I don't know Amy, but I read a question about her today, the "what would you do if your man hit you" question and read your response!.

Thanks for being a REAL man! Thanks for being a man who respect women and not overpower them!.

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I have had AmyE pray for me in the past!.I have answered many of her questions!.The atheists and anti-christians have attacked here many times for wanting to pray for others needs!.Thank you Semper Fi for writing a fine poem about AmyE!. I will continue to accept her offer to pray!.God bless both you and AmyE!.
You write some very nice poems!.

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I was once in her shoes!. Thank you for writing this heartfelt poem, Semper!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thanks for all of us, Semper!

Your verses are powerfully written with respect and love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't know the people in this poem!.!.!.!.but, that doesn't alter my appreciation of a fine poem!. Thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Your poem is deep my friend!. It hearkens to other singer song writers like Joan Baez who sang about not knowing what you got til its gone, or the O Jays and she use to be my girl or Bread and being lost without your love!.

One of the good things in your poem is that the one stepped on proved she had strength you could not understand!. Just as you could not understand how she could have faith in the first place so you made fun of it!.

In this poem is redemption!. Both to the writer and the one who it is talking about!. That is what God's good news to man is all about!. You summed it all up pretty much with this poem!. Later!.

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I love this poem and love you for supporting our dear sister in the Lord!.!.!.she is free for better things to come!.!.!.I look forward to the day when these evils are gone! Hallelujah!
God bless you for this act of restoration!
Semper!.!.!.I had to come back and read this three more times!. How sad it truly is for someone to alter what God is trying to create in a person, a women, man or child!.!.!.in a friendship, a romance, a marriage!. God is writing on us !.!.his temple! And woe to the man or woman who tries to undermine this!.
Who's standing over you while you sleep!? Is indeed powerful!. I would say!.!.!.that we need the Holy Spirit of the Lord standing over those who sin in these manners!. While they are asleep and awake! Hopefully leading them to repentance and restoration to the Lord!. And she who is praying is praying for this too I believe! For the heart which the Lord is giving us is a heart going towards our Lord, full of forgiveness! This is my song!Www@QuestionHome@Com