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Question: My poem called Why oh why!? I winged this one True story in my poem!?
Why oh why
My gf cheated I barley cried
I prayed wisdom
she acted dumb
I felt heated
because she cheated
my new best friend is captain crunch
I ate some for lunch
my car is my new wife
at least she will not hurt me in this life
now i lift weights
everything in my life is going to be straight
I dont worry about finding a mate
I almost was a sucker for a girl who was using me for bait
Life was getting stupid
Oh no I just killed cupid
now my heart is in closed in an armored pod
Time for me to get closer with god
What do you guys/gals think about it
I made this up in like 3 mins bit this happened for realWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Brat!! R u making fun of me!?!? Is the car cheaper than the wife!? LOL! =)
Gotcha! Keep the car, tho!.!.!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
that's beautifully raw and emotional!.
humanity is indeed the cruelest of them all especially when it comes to each other!.
this is really a great piece, nice way to deal with your anguish and upset!.
awesome!
cheers:]Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm sad coz the nice person I've met
thru YA is turned into a bitter person!.!.!.
let go yourself from the past!.!. "
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good for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think ur a poet and u didnt even know it!Www@QuestionHome@Com