Metaphorical madness !!!...What am I without you?

Question: Metaphorical madness !!!!.!.!.What am I without you!?

What Will I Be With You!?

Whispered breaths
Warm hands
Wanting hearts
Waiting aware

Lift me above
Open my eyes
Vent my soul
Empty my tears

Make me
Everything I can be

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I'm actually crying right now, brokenhearted!. Thank you so much for posting this, it soothes my heart a bit!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why do you think someone will be able to do what you ask!?

It is you
that's got to do
the doodley do

Make yourself be

There is one!.
There is one!.
That is two!.
Each one is one
each doing the do
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Lovely
I enjoy the Ws in your first stanza!. I wonder what you could do with Ls in the second!.

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I like the talent you show on YA Poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com