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Question: Am I obsessed or possessed!?
I feel obsessed with the sea or else possessed by someone who is!. I guess you'll have to suffer through this phase!.
Moonlight Rendezvous
Your silken skin is all aglow,
Bathed in the moon's soft light!.
Your body, nude from head to toe,
Is really quite a sight!.
We run across the sandy beach,
Into the rippling tide!.
Secluded beach for us alone,
No reason we should hide!.
To swim and play out in the surf,
A pleasure in this life!.
This love we have grows stronger still,
For we are man and wife!.
Hold me in your arms so soft,
I'll hold you tight in mine!.
We'll share a laugh and then a sip,
Of homemade apple wine!.
The taste of love will fill the air,
I'll take you by your wrist!.
And hand in hand we'll make our way,
Back through the salty mist!.
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I'm hoping you won't grow out of this phase too soon! As always, a work that comes from the heart and is spoken to the heart!.!.!.Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com
So beautiful and so sensual!.
I think I would love to be the lady swimming with you and sipping wine before a night of making passionate love!. Where do these ideas come from!? I think you have set out to make every girl of all ages fall madly in love with you, and it is working!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are obsessed by your wife and possessed by your muse!. This little poem is such a delight!. If I had known you two were alone on this beach, I'd have given you your privacy!. But where else could I hear a poem as lovely as this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
perhaps a bit of both,,, neither is a bad way to be when the result is a delightful poem such as this!.
I can't begin to see how this might be considered suffering through anything!.
well done Mr!. D, well done indeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are for sure, a romantic fool
But your pen is a magical tool!.
You took me there, I taste the sea
I only wish that it was me!.
I'm not trying to make a pass Dondi--just envy your Mrs!.!.
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I would imagine neither, the call of poetry does not have anything to do with the mind or the supernatural but is just singing with your hand!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You are neither obsessed or possessed, unless you mean an obsessed romantic possessed with talent!
This is lovely and FREEEEE!
(I had to throw those extra E's in there to balance out the S'sss!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'd say your possessed into being obsessed with being passionate!.
(You're one of the most romantic poets on this site with a sniper rifle!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Obsession IS possession!.!.!.and if possessed by the waters of the ocean, then what better to write your fabulous poems by!.!.!.wonderful reading this early Sunday! Good Morning!Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have just described the place that I would like to be at this very moment in time!.!.
Thank you!.
It was a pleasure to read this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Well penned as usual!. Very sensual!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very beautiful, it shows the mind stays young and never forgets! Nice poetry written with a romantic pen!
Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very sensual and visual!. I wish I could hear you singing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
a lovely picture you painted and memories returned!.!.thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Your in love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds like it is a good place to be!. Have fun and keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com
cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com
hmmmm, maybe bothWww@QuestionHome@Com
i thank you just like to write poems, a very good one by the way,Www@QuestionHome@Com