"Secret Love" - My short poem?

Question: "Secret Love" - My short poem!?

I'm 15 and this was one of the first poems i ever wrote!.!.!. Hope you like it:

Hiding well within,
Never letting go,
Freedom from this,
Never will I know,
My Heart thumping,
Will it ever end!?
The thought of you,
My best friend,
Hurting from inside,
Tearing me apart,
When I come near,
You turn and dart,
Never do I wonder,
Why you run from me,
You make me cry,
Together we should be!.

Comments are very welcome!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You express the emotions of a 15 year old very well!. You have good rhythm and the rhyme doesn't feel forced!.

Good work!. Keep writing!.
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Nice one!.!.

=D Keep writing!.

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not my favourite!. you describe the situation, left wishing for emotion, Www@QuestionHome@Com

Talented
thats what i would say
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