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JAMES 'GEORGE' ROY

There once was a little boy,
His name was James Roy,
Who was still playing with his toy,
It gave him a lot of JOY,
Oh boy,
Was he enjoyed,
He had a sister, that he always would annoy,
He always shouted at his sister "oi!!",
Would this end the life of poor Roy!?

~certainly not~

And as he grew,
He learnt kung fu,
One day he went to a zoo,
And saw a giant kangaroo,
He went into the cage of the kangaroo,
And then he blew,
Into its eyes,
Was it a terrifying sight to view!,
The kangaroo was sent to the capital of Peru,
That night,he ate turkey stew,
And for desert,chocolate fondue,
The next day he made a canoe,
Which was made of bamboo!?,
It was cobalt blue,
But he forgot,his assignment was overdue,
He had to wear torn shoes,
A man pity him and gave him shampoo(!?),
And James George Roy said"thank you"!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What are you smoking and where can I get some!?

Cool poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Kinda confusing!.!. But it was nice one for first timers!.!.

anyway, it was good!.

=D

Can you help me with mine!?
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Koo Daddy O bro Roy has a new toy he jump for joy every one was happy they all enjoy Roy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you sensitive to criticism!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

its kinda confusing lay off the over ryhming
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