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Question: Opinions on this piece of poetry!!?
does it seem unfinished to you!?

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Flames behind a bitter smile
Condemning words of elusive hope
Bloody thoughts of soul and death
All bound into a solemn rope

A rope that helps me scale the skies
Conquering all known human lies

Trekking over jagged plains
Collecting painful arrowed rains
Watching the sun rise over hell
Searing all within its cell

a cell that locks the sinister away
letting their book of life
brown and fray!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The answer is, "does it seem unfinished to you!?"

I would say Yes!. Do you say Yes!?

It's a little sinister!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It does seem a bit unfinished, yes
It's also a little too graphic for my taste so!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com