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Question: Critique My New Poem: Look Forward !?
Look forward
Don’ look back
For what happened in your life
For the experiences you went through
Learn the lesson and move ahead
Don’t waste a precious day
Dwelling on yesterday
Our days are jewels
To appreciate
Look to the bright side
Don’t be distracted
Don’t bring the pain
Stay focused
Listen to your life beats
What is telling you
Get enthusiazed
Get excited
And march ahead
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Nice poem! So many of us get up in yesterday's!.
Very upbeat!.
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Very motivational poem, i believe with a quick review and some expansion you could make this a great one! A work in progress, good start!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com