What say you poets of this Trigee?

Question: What say you poets of this Trigee!?

Life /A Garden

Through the change---- like garden variety
life's many swings---moods of colour
Different emotions--- in a Crystal metaphor vase
Dealt with each day--- petals of opportunity
A new challenge ---- presents itself

Posted this earlier only got 2 replys thought of doing it again, thanks for the comments!

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This is very good!. I especially like the right side as a poem, but they are all wonderful!. Great overall message too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I haven't been answering much lately but I've been reading still, and I remember reading this one!.
I can't remember who's answer this was but:

petals=plural
itself=singular

Therefore:

Dealt with each day, !. !. !.petals of opportunity
New challenges !. !. !. present themselves!.

I thought was a good suggestion!.

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Life is!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.A beautiful arrangement
One with thorns!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.But short-lived
We bleed!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Each day
It's a trial!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Yet must be held
Close to the heart!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Ever closer
Though it wounds us!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Without remorse!.

I hope you really do breed Maltese dogs!. They are so adorable (Andrew got a raw deal)!. Bless you sweatheart, you write a lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's very lovely; "crystal metaphor vase" is a metaphor itself, for poetry!. Well penned!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com