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Question: Does this poem make my point!?
Lady In White
A lovely lady all in white,
Is on the dancehall floor!.
I see her visage just as soon,
As I walk through the door!.
A lovely sight as hair of brown,
Spills from her cowboy hat!.
She flits around out on the floor,
She's nimble as a cat!.
Her pretty feet in high heeled boots,
Have their own mind it seems!.
The only moves I've seen like that,
Were always in my dreams!.
Her western clothes of pure snow white,
makes me have feelings deep!.
I know when I go home tonight,
I'll see her in my sleep!.
So, why not, says myself to me,
Save all a lot of time!.
And ask her to come home with me,
And always to be mine!.
If I could have, and I could hold,
My heart would fill with pride!.
I wish I had the lady white,
To be my blushing bride!.
An old fantasy from 15 years ago!. She was a real lady, but I never even learned her name!. Enjoy it if you will, burn it if you won't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You remind me of an old cow-poke - a gentleman with old world chivalry!. The dream is far finer than the reality would ever have been!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
As usual, a song/poem filled with longing and memories!. I sing all your poems (even though I can't carry a tune)!. My late husband wrote me poetry all the time!. We read poetry to each other before!.!.well!. you know!. You remind me of him sometimes and I loved him very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
How can a poem fill one with such gentility and romance and at the same time the urge to dance!?
This one does all that and more!
Thank you Dondi!.
The giant eraser thinks your name should be Dodi!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
An enchanting vision, Dondi!. Great imagery and lyrical as always!. Excellent work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Hi, your a true romantic, I love this poem!!!!! Thank you for sharing it I do believe your point has been made and very beautifully!.
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This is truly beautiful!. Do you have music written to accompany this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fun poem!. The explanation helped too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I enjoyed your poem!. You are talking about a fantasy shared by almost all heterosexual males!. and its funny ! TY Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, your poem makes it's point clearly!. How do you know her booted feet were pretty!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think this does get your point across and a romantic gesture at that! Thanks for sharing this!
Cheers!
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The joys of being a people watcher observer, You took me there!.
Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
makes me have feelings deep
this liine seems akward but other than that it's fineWww@QuestionHome@Com
You always make romance romantic!.!.!.TYWww@QuestionHome@Com
ahhhh,,, what a fun read this was!.
romantic without sappiness is always a treat to my mindWww@QuestionHome@Com
You make us women glad we're women! We should clone you!
Sing on!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com