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Gentle Hands
by C!.S!. Scotkin

Gentle hands…………………Reach for you
proclaim love………………!.!. embrace you!.
from my eyes………………!.!.!.warm tears,
love streams………………… cleanse my heart!.

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One day I will be capable of these things but for now I need to stick to my free verse as it suits my brain waves and how they travel!.
I like it
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With respect this seems like another way for poor poets to seem more talented than they actually are!. In reality these are three terrible poems and the fact that you have intertwined them does not impress me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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You said it all in a few words!. That's one of the reasons I love these Trigees!. Www@QuestionHome@Com