Lets write about love, lets write.a small thing and i want what you think guys?

Question: Lets write about love, lets write!.a small thing and i want what you think guys!?

Poems can write about love
Broken hearts
And pens
Papers that soaked in tears and blood
All that
Can
But I cant
Cause simply ,love was never for me
Love for those who had the right
In the first place to live
With good parents
Felt secure and loved
Love is like butter
Luxury
And my skin
Is rough ,
Feet are stolen
How could I love ,when I don’t know how to look at anyone
Fear disguised me
From everything
Around!
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Slightly weak,from a technical point of view!. Try expanding on some of your more compelling themes such as loss and less on the "Chocolate Box" images of love you use!.
I think I understand what you are trying to express and there are beautiful turns of phrase and you have raw talent definitely,just try to make it more earthy and authentic!.
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Niiice, You're very talented!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's pretty sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com