In response to a comment, I wrote this little ditty....any comments?

Question: In response to a comment, I wrote this little ditty!.!.!.!.any comments!?

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By Jonni F!.

How would I dance
with a glass of P!.G!.!?
That's Pinot Grigio,
for you and me!.

I'd twinkle around,
and be light on my feet!.
I wouldn't care,
to take a seat!.

Chardonnay would make me jive,
it really makes me come alive!
Malbec, Merlot, Cab and Zin,
across the room,
I'd take a spin!

Riesling and Petit Syrah,
I'm jitterbugging,
say "hurrah"!

Bordeaux and finally French Champagne,
It's Happy Dancing time again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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What a fun and joyful poem with a great sound!. You did a wonderful job with your rhyme and meter and you did a fabulous job of entertaining us as well!. I'll have a glass and dance right along with you!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wine dancing through the night
with Jonni, her feet so light
no need to see morn's light
she's in bed!.!.!. sleeping tight!

Nice wines!. You should make a series on these and the cast of characters that sample!. I have seen many 'characters' when I have attended wine tastings!. Myself, I am just an observer! lol Now where did I put that case!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I keep hoping that your chipper mood will rub off on me !.!.!.
I would love to be doing the jitter bug instead of the stress walk I m doing today!.
Why don't you pass me a glass of that Merlot and see if I can pull out of this little puddle I created!.!.!. LOL!
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I'll raise my glass in a salute to that poem!.Happy, delightful, fun!.No more "whining" for awhile for me!.I'll drink to that!.Cheers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is light-hearted, musical and poetic!. It engages the reader!. It is a very good example of how practice makes perfect (well, almost perfect)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, no !. !. !. no, I really should be going!.
I gotta get up early and get on Answers!.

Ahhh! What the hell, pour me another--lets cut a rug!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now I'll know what to serve at my next party!!
Well done and very Happy, indeed!Www@QuestionHome@Com