OK a poem about eyes, i call it "Blue bliss" comments are great?

Question: OK a poem about eyes, i call it "Blue bliss" comments are great!?

A girl in my new college form has these amazing blue eyes :) arrh so i wrote this for the eyes!.!.!.do you like it!?

Crafty eyes by now persist
streams on the river of blue bliss,
caught me again i wish longer
of that bejeweled wonder,
and when they met at glance
was his eyes to her trance,
just a glimpse, a second still
look up into her eyes i will!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Aww that's so sweet and beautiful! If you show it to her she will love you for that!. I wish some boy would write that about me ='(!. lol!. BeautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com