A penny for your thoughts...haikus I wrote?

Question: A penny for your thoughts!.!.!.haikus I wrote!?

How strange, innocence!.
A flutter of breath, and her
Sweet hands curled in sleep!.

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Notes scream through silence
Guitars claw the air with chords
The piano sighs

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Darkness, like sorrow
Hollow eyes and shattered dreams
This will destroy you

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The first was my favorite, one of the goals of any sort of haiku, traditional or western, is to say a lot in few lines!. 'sweet hands curled in sleep' says so much, with such vivid imagery!. Its just lovely!.

Oh! and the plural of haiku, is haiku!.!.!. I know not a big deal, but I found it interesting, perhaps you will too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the 1st one okay!.!.!. I'm not too fond of the 2nd!.!.!. but I really really enjoyed the 3rd!.

All in all I must say!.!. Well Done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Good!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com