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Question: What is your favourite poetic part of the day!?
Tears of dawn, leave them be
By Jellz Fisher 080903
Droplets cling,
to webs at dawn!.
Leaves are laden,
at this time of morn!.
Nourishing life,
both awake and yet born
Refreshing the life that we see
Pearls of moisture
hang, nature’s art!.
Gentle like tears,
straight from God’s heart
Moisturizing beauty,
Creation’s part
Refreshing the life that we see
(with thanks to Doofy from P&S for the "phrase that pays" in the title yoinked from one of his questions)
I may revisit this at a later stage and add more stanzas!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The morning dew - does such magic stuff!. It hangs like crystals on everything!. Spiderwebs are pure artistry - and grass stems are the same!. Crystals hung on necklaces - and line the garden lane!. Yeah - I like the morning - too bad I usually do not get up in time ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is wonderful!. Visual, engaging the senses and the emotions!.
As I write, in the minutes before dawn, I am again grateful for the miraculus creation of the Universe and for people like you who express the miracle in words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Really like the imagery!. You could prune some to improve the flow more!. E!.G!. "Refreshing life we see!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
lovely Jellz!.
favourite poetic part of the day!?
great question!
!.!.many parts are edible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is really lovely Jellz, The rhythm is great when I read it out loud!
I love the dawn as well!. I hope you will add more stanzas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com