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Question: Seeking Solitude!. Opinions please!!?
Hi, I'm sorry for posting this poem again, but I reached my daily answering limit, so I thought I'd just ask one last question!.
It's a poem I wrote on surfing and the ocean!.
Thank you for your time!.

Seeking Solitude

No limits
None north, none south
An addiction, a frothing mouth
None west, none east
A swell reflecting inner peace
Known to few, unknown to most
A playground of pride this earth boasts

Challenge the mind, start the chase
Explore the freedom you seek to embrace
Reach that point of no return
Cross the bridge, watch it burn
Push forward, draw the lines
No pressure, control resigns

A beam of light, so dim, but straight
Confess your wrongs, confront your fate

A fountain of life, a story told
Water imitates gold
A salty substance, a drug in disguise
A mere few that understand its highsWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i thought it was really great!.
like i could hear that as a song, and if that's what you were going for then it was amaziing (:Www@QuestionHome@Com