What's the best journey you can think of?

Question: What's the best journey you can think of!?

She's smoking down the Mainline
She's burning up the track
She's Momma's little rebel
And she's never coming back

She doesn't need no luggage
All she needs is cash
To buy her Mainline ticket
She's leaving all this trash

She counts out all her money
She smokes a little weed
But the Mainline main attraction
Is the hit she really needs

The ticket seller's smiling
He counts the cash again
She dangles from the links in
A twisted chemist's chain

And now the Mainline's humming
The tracks are burning bright
Her eyes roll in their sockets
As God turns out the light

She riding on a Dragon
With pennies on her eyes
They found her in the bathroom
By following the flies!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Very well done!. A great read about drugs with the train and track metaphors!. Meter of 7,6 and end rhyme too, most impressive!. Pennies on her eyes!.!.!.especially good image of death at the end!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is one powerful poem about the tragedy of addiction and it's worst case scenario!.!.!.thank you for the message so expertly penned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Drug addiction is a curse!.

You have expressed it in this poem with its unexpected twist at the end!. The journey is not worth the terminus!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was good; I was singing with that from the get go!. Heavy story line full of awesome metaphors and a fast paced rhythm speeding the reader down the rails!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

At last - a poem!. Very nice!. You have gained the 'Iano seal of approval'!.

Something to say - and said well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's one heck of a trip Foggi! Amazing poem man! One way ticket outta here!. Blows my mind!. Great rhythm and powerful delivery!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Life!.

God Bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, amazing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From light to dark
and light again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yikes!
heavy Fog!.
poetic reality shaken from a fang!.!.
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That took my breath away dudeWww@QuestionHome@Com