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Night Writer, A Trigee
By C!.S!. Scotkin

To write…………!.!.To take up the pen
at night…………!.!.!.in the quiet hours
my heart…………!.!.in wonder and joy
delights…………!.!.!.and play
in words…………!.!.my music

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Everybody is really getting the hang of these!. Another stellar effort!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!. Wow!. Woooooowwww!. I am amazed every single time I see a Trigee by you!. You have such a soft poetic feel in this one, the dim lights, no danger of a phone ringing, only the chirping of crickets, the rasping of cicadas, and the rustling of the leaves with the soft slap-drip of the rain!. The epic line of the third poem "And plays/in words/my music!" This is inspired!Www@QuestionHome@Com

"and plays in words" would be correct, but would
"and plays my music" be when reading the right side by itself!?
Maybe I need more coffee this early morn!
I admire your tenacity in continuously putting these out!
I dare not try one!.


I give up!. I am not trying one!. I went through some old poems this morning looking for one I could use to try one of these and it gave me a headache!. Hopefully one will materialize on its own at some point!. Until then, I'll just stay happy reading yours:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your good at these!. beautiful, peaceful, & delightful!. GM, have a blessed day!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very awesome CS!.!.!.!.I think I'm growing, though!.!.!.I thought it should be "and plays" then went back and read your edit note!. I know you're thinking,"she can be taught, she can be taught!" LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

So peaceful, relaxing!.!.!.Wonderful!
This is one of my favorites by far!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

My eyes enjoyed the relay of information to the brain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gotta let that drumbeat rock your soul!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

She's working hard at it!.!.!.!.and doing well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nurse!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.You feeling ok!?
patient!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.I ain't dead!
lullaby!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Sweet Jesus!Www@QuestionHome@Com