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Question: How is my poem for my best friend!?
The start bit about her being scared to stay over was from when we were about six and she had a fear of staying at other peoples!. lol!.!.!. we are now nineteen and have been best friends since we were about 3!

I have a friend
Who is perfect for me
She listens to all my problems
No matter how dumb they may be
She likes herself for who she is
And never tries to change
She tells me to be myself
And that I should never change
She was scared sleeping over
But she would still stay
And we would talk for hours
About nothing at all
We would talk about love and life
And discuss what we wanted to be
She knew just how I felt
And how happy I could be
She listens to me patiently
But never judges what I do or say
She helped with all my problems
And never went away
I never once felt judged by her
How much that meant to me
That I could tell her all my dreams
And she would listen to me
My friend never goes and tells
What is dear to me
She keeps it all bottled up inside
And doesn't spread it like a bee
I am thankful for that friend of mine
Our friendship will never end
And she will always be there
For she is my best friend Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poem is cute and simple!. It's nice that you included real life examples!. I think your friend will like it and appreciate your gesture and show of friendship!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem is a lovely tribute to someone who deserves a lovely tribute!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats a really really really really really nice poem! It relates to me and a friend of mine!!! really nice!!!! i love it:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

love it!. very very sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!!!!!!! and if your friend is as fabitty fab as she seems, she'll love it too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the poem!. It makes me want to be friends with her!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww, you don't find many friends like that, maybe one or two in a lifetime that you can really depend on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its lovelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Awww i think it was good!. If i was your friend i would like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

aww Your friend will really like it! Cool poem and really nice to read!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your best friend will love it!. Wonderful poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

its good apart from the line about the bee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

creative and thoughtful!. She'll' love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Brought a tear to my eye ;DWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's good!.!.!. it sounds like a friend worthy of a poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

cute! she will love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pretty long but sounds sweet!.nice poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com