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Question: Anybody read these before, and what'd you think!?
these are passages from one of my favorite books, "A certain slant of light" i love them, i wish i could write like this!. Don't you think these are great, and how does it make you feel!?


" The library smells like old books- a thousand leather doorways into other worlds!. I hear silence like the mind of God!. I feel a presence in the empty chair beside me!. The librarian watches me suspiciously!. BUt the library is a sacred place, nad i sit with the patron saint of readers!. Pulsing goddess light moves through me for one moment like a glimpse of eternity instantly forgotten!. She is gone!. I smell mold, i hear the clock ticking, i see an empty chair!. Ask me now and ill say this is just a place where you cn't play music or eat!. she's gone!. The library sucks!."

A LETTER FROM A MUSE TO HER POET
"Dear sir,
I was called away and couldn't bring you, but now i feel haunted!. I know that sometimes you felt i was a part of you and that losing me would leave a hole in your heart, but that's not true!.I liked to pretend i was the core of your talent, but it wasn't me!. Everything you do, the ideas you weave, the lines you write, the words you chose, it was always only you!. Please forgive me!. I'm sorry that i didn't say goodbye!."
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Great writing ^_^ I would love to write like that, but I don't think I'm old enough to know how!. It makes me feel a little spacey!. You know that books really are portals to different places ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow indeed!. i feel myself quite envious of the talent who wrote this!
beautiful structure also imagery is simply amazing:DWww@QuestionHome@Com

very descriptive and nice use of imagry!. The characters seem very real, :The library sucks" lol!. Its pretty coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I LUV IT! it makes me feel like important and goodWww@QuestionHome@Com