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Question: IS THIS (GAS ) POEM OK!?!?!.its for school!?
gas prices keep on going up
people hate it, they
can't pay that much!.
Alot of people decide to walk
because the prices are just too high!.
to pay that much
is crazy!.have to do
it anyways, so if gas prices go up or down!.
either pay for it or ride a bus!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Gas prices
They keep going up
People, they
can't pay that much!.

Because the prices
are too high!.
Some people have
to decide

To pay that much
just to drive
take the bus
or buy a bike

Made some improvements!. Feel free to use it if you like it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

im 17 !. please comment on this poem

The gas price, is going up
Volatile, it irritates
The people, they all agree
To the shock, of new dollar signs

People travel, without tires
Tripping sideways, on sidewalk
Walking fast, to compensate
For the slow speed, without gas

Bicycle bells, for the car honks
Sturdy helmet, replacing seat belt
The gas price, has gone beyond us
once again we enter, the era of pedestrianWww@QuestionHome@Com

The gas prices keep going up
People decide they can't pay that much
Some people walk and the Doctor's make out
Because now patients contract arthritis or the gout
So what it comes down to is either them or us
You have to pay at the pump or take the city busWww@QuestionHome@Com

Numerous news stories of "Prices at the Pump";
People hate it!.!.!.
forget to stop at they station when they see a number and can't pay it
Efficient cars stuttering to a stop and people run like Forrest Gump!.

Just work on making yourself happy with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have read this as you have asked and have found it to be terrible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its not there in good, but its ok!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly!? i doubt that you'll get an "A"!. Maybe try not 2 be so obvious!. It's poetry!. Www@QuestionHome@Com