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I know this poem sucks but please give me your opinion on how much it sucks!?
on the scale of 1-10 10 meaning it really sucks please tell me how much this poem sucks
i know its bad probally a 10
in the time before the beggining there was nothing that was new
nothing that was old it all just was
some say this some say that
bickering amongst one another to find who is right
listening to no one is my goal
my own hearbeat must be heard
same beliefs may be common but to what extent they are followed is up to your beat
so rise to your feet and speak your mind
no one has one just like you Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"beggining" is spelled "beginning"
Poems are subjective, just like art, so asking on here is going to get you a lot of different answers!.
When all is said and done, it's your opinion on your poems, that matters!.
I'm not sure I understand the poem!.
Before the "beginning", meaning Creation!?
Then, people's differing beliefs about what happened!?
Then, switching to yourself, and others as being unique!?
I would have maybe put something in the middle, and said a little more, but, it doesn't suck at all!.
Maybe don't give people the "idea" in the first place to tell you it sucks!?
This is not really poetry!. It has no rhythm!. It also has a few grammatical and spelling errors!.
also, if your name is danielle, why is the poem by oliver!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
1!. Sorry, no more, I think it's pretty interesting!. :) Anything can be good in it's own or a brand new unique kinda way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i give it an 8 i kind of like the 5th and 6th lineWww@QuestionHome@Com