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Question: Do you know if you have been someone's spark!?
I have had some sparks this day!.
Could this poem be an offering of thanks!?

Solitary spark
tiny ray of hope
a crumb offered
when one
is starving
in the dark
first it
then smolders
in despair's embers
fire's gentle glow
dries tears
slowly thaws
frozen heart
brings to life

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Beautifully written real poetry with metaphors and other imagery!. Many people on this site reignited my own dying embers!. If I live for another century, I will never be able to repay them!.

Very Good B!.!.Yes its a good poem of offering to thanks!.!. But its us who are offering our thanks to you!.You have unthawed our frozen heart and brought us back to life and have given us the crumb for us to devour !.!. But your embers will never completely go out as i know your fire will always burn for us to once again warm our brains , and our hands, and our heart once again!. Huggs!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A poem can be anything you desire it to be!. It can be a lament, a thank you, a celebration or simply an observation on a myriad of topics!.
It is your heart which comes out 'on paper' so to speak!. So if you wish this to be an expression of thanks for a spark!.!.
So be it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the one person whose spark i want to be, will be letting someone else light his fire!.
the spark he kept lit inside of me has died out!. i don't think there is even an ember for someone else to get going!.
you are muched loved ma, don't you ever doubt it!. sometimes love doesn't come from the one we want, sometimes this is all we get!.
you WILL get through this!. you are too strong of a woman not to!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I do like this I do, nicely set up in first line!.!.!. Solitary spark!.!.!. but alas I think I need a defibrillator for my dead-battery heart!. click, click, sputter!.

Interesting the tie you established between spark and hunger!. Obviously a different type of hunger!. I often use a testla coil to spark but then I make neon signs!. lol Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

From little sparks, warm fires!. nice expression of gratitude and well written!. Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, but little did I know she bathes in kerosene!.!.!.but only in the company of her trusted intimates!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A glowing tribute ma!. Vive la flame eternale! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nicely done ma!. Hopefully he does see it!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com

You da Mom!! Yes, it can be an offering of thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice Ma!.!.once again!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Kindness, is a spark you speak of well, Kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good one! I like it!!! You go Ma!Www@QuestionHome@Com

that was goodWww@QuestionHome@Com