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Question: Rate my poem!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Cute boy changing by the lockers
My eyes are easily drawn toward his boxers
I love his milky white skin
For him to cover it up is truly a sin
He sure loves to smile
As his muscles flex
And he starts to take off that tight shirt
He always strips down to his bare chest
He’s the best when it comes to teasing
I would be in eternal bliss
If he ever gave me a kiss

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i'm pretty sure this is probably written by someone who is gay!.
although i dont agree with gay people, i thought your poem was really good!. i liked it it was cute!.

please answer mine!. thanks

This seems to me to be more like soft core porn than a poem, though I could care less about your sexual orientation!.!.!.no, I don't think it's a sin, and no, it's not immoral!. It is who you are!. I don't see anything here, poetically, but instead just a literal description of your momentary lusting!. No metaphors, similes, or multiplicity of meanings, no poetry!. Sorry, but best wishes on your quest(s)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

'' Cute '', sexy poem girl !! =)
However, I think you shall work more on your poetic skills because you've got the talent!.!.

I would be in eternal bliss
If he ever gave me a kiss << That was good!.!.!.

IT would be kind of like rating a poem of burglary, or of slaying someone!.
Why not write within the moral boundaries!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

this poem is really sweet and hot but i can't agree with you because your probably gay!. But i still like it!. Are you gay!?!?!?!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com