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Question: Can you tell what you think about my poems and what you think they man!?
these are the poems you only have to read one if you want but would greatly appreciate it


I need you
By: Pepsi Man
i need you
i swear its true
ever since that day
i dream about you everyday
i have you on my mind
and i wish you were all mine
your smile drives me crazy
its makes me think of daises
the sparkel of yours eyes
it makes me feel like the sky
your beauty overall leaves me in awe
i swear you have no flaws
i hope you see
how much i need
to be with you
til we say adieu

Just When
By: Pepsi Man

Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions
to leave me alone in depression
just when i have gained confidence in myself to be with you
you do things to make me blue
just when i realized you're the one for me
you just let me be
just remember you will always be in my heart
even if you depart

Just When V!.2
By: Pepsi Man
Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions
and go get yourself a boyfriend
and leave me in depression
i just dont aprehend
i see you and him together
i wish it was me
you leave me at the end of my tether
you make me feel like a nobody
but you'll always be in my heart
i will always be your friend
even if you depart
til the very end!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poems sound like you like this girl skin deep!.!.!.but cool poems nonethelessWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love them good work and what they can mean so many different because its like a painting every one think it is something differentWww@QuestionHome@Com

Great poems!. You have a talent!. Just pray like heck and maybe God will answer your prayer if you are sincere!.Www@QuestionHome@Com