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Question: Can you please tell me what you think!?
These are the first three poems i ever write
all three were written from the bottom of my heart so please tell me what you think and if you want you can also seem them here
http://www!.quizilla!.com/my/profile


I need you
By: Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man
i need you
i swear its true
ever since that day
i dream about you everyday
i have you on my mind
and i wish you were all mine
your smile drives me crazy
its makes me think of daises
the sparkel of yours eyes
it makes me feel like the sky
your beauty overall leaves me in awe
i swear you have no flaws
i hope you see
how much i need
to be with you
til we say adieu

Just When
By:Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man

Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions
to leave me alone in depression
just when i have gained confidence in myself to be with you
you do things to make me blue
just when i realized you're the one for me
you just let me be
just remember you will always be in my heart
even if you depart

Just When V!.2
By:Alvaro C aka Pepsi Man
Just when i think i have all the answers you change the questions
and go get yourself a boyfriend
and leave me in depression
i just dont aprehend
i see you and him together
i wish it was me
you leave me at the end of my tether
you make me feel like a nobody
but you'll always be in my heart
i will always be your friend
even if you depart
til the very end!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You got talent!. These are really good seriously!. I've had poems published in books myself and damn your poems beat some of the poems published with mine!. Their really good!. You should keep making them!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You should post those on a website and maybe you can publish them!. Please look at mine:

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is a very nice poem please post moreWww@QuestionHome@Com