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Does this poem describe a Power Outage!?
No warning came
no alerts announced
awakened to abnormal
outage of power!.
Light switch flicked
no immediate relief
to morning's strange
Sun risen, indeed,
my eyes so confirm
no comforting light
warms my soul!.
Ah, answer made clear
problem isn't with eyes
high water rising
heart, 'tis power source
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The metaphor for the heart as power source! You get it, Ma!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I love this emotional and telling poem!. Tears flow so abundantly that eventually the heart can become detached!. But this energy will come back,the light will return to warm your soul just as the comforting lights return after a electrical power outage!. This poem is so well written and provocative!. I do love it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think my bottom is my power source, when it fails to function, everything else falls apart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Actually it does ma!. Very nicely put!. I hate those power outages myself!. LOLWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yes Ma we have all been through more times than one!. I fear for this new hurricane down on the coast and fear for myself as it will turn and come north where i live!. Great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
More about a broken heart!. Don't worry Ma!. As soon as the heart heals , the power will be back on!.Great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Power outage or broken heart!?
I enjoyed it!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Profound and Sound
Bring out the Defibrillator!.!.
water is love that stopped the heart!. the sun comes up but you see only darkWww@QuestionHome@Com
Not bad! very amusing and so true!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
nope loss of hope over a stormWww@QuestionHome@Com