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Question: Rate my poem about racism !?
I'm 13(goin on 30 LoL) its about racism its short cuz i teared up when i wrote it

(>'_')> RACISM <('_'<)
Racism is bad
Racism makes the ignorent glad
Racism is sad
Racim makes me mad
if there was no more racism that would b rad

-Stefanie age 13Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes it is bad
and makes ignorant people glad
sorry it makes you sad
but please dont get mad
cuz your poem is so frekin rad =]

the awesomness man, the awesomeness !!!!
loved it simple yet powerful

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if you were 8 or nine I would say "oh good you spelled everything right!." If you spelled everything right!. (or used SPELL CHECK!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com

um did you write this in like 1 second!?
racism is a strong subject!.!. and a poem about something like that needs to be heartfelt and welll thought out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think that was lame
all the rhymes were pretty tame
not that i think that racism is cool
its just that you sound like a tool!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it cause your telling the complete truth
continue doing what you do it is veary touching Www@QuestionHome@Com

every line doesnt have to rhyme that much :]

and its pretty basic

but other than that i guess its pretty goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol!. I would take out the rad part!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

good :] touching!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i hate racism!!! hate it sooo bad!.
i love your poem